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Examinations满分例文：下面是一篇专家修改过的独立写作文章，大家可以感受一下。Ifyoucouldgobacktosometimeandplaceinthepast，whenandwherewouldyougo?Why?Usespecificreasonsanddetailstosupportyourchoice.Inthiscompetitiveworld，sometimesyoumaywishyoucouldstoptimeandgobacktothepast.I，asagraduatestu—dentworkinginalargecompan~havealwaysfoundlifetough，andwishIcouldgobacktomychildhoodwhenlifewaspinkandfullofhappiness.1wouldwanttogobacktomychildhoodtoenjoymyhappyandcarefreetime，becausecompetitionallthroughoutmyIifehasburdenedmesomuchthatIreallylookforwardtosomerest.Needlesstosay,childhood，whennobosses.work，orsalariesexist，providesuswithanenvironmentfreefromalIstress，competitionandresponsibilityinlife.WhenIamremindedofmychildhood，whatimmediatelycomestomindarethegameswithfriends.myparents’ef_fortstogivemethebestthingsandourfunnyandcarefreedreamsofbeingfamousrockstars，actors，doctors，andteachers.1tmightbeworthwhiletoenjoyalIthispleasureagaininIifefromtimetotime.Thechanceofreturningtochildhoodwouldalsoenableustocorrectthemistakescommonlymadethen.1wilIneverforgetthedaysinmychildhoodwhen1wassixyearsoldandmyfam—ilywasquitepoorIsawabeautifuIbutexpensivedollquitelikemyfriend's.Ilikedit，andwantedtohaveone，butmymothercouldnotaffordit.Whenshesaidsorry,Icriedloudlyandsaid，“Ihateyou，mom!”YoucanimaginehowhurtmymotherwasbythissuddenoutburstandthefeelingthatshecouldnotgivemeeverythingIneeded.Ireallyregretthisevennow.IfIcouldturnbacktime1wouldfixthisfauItinmvchildhoodandsay：“IIoveyou.mOm.”1wouldliketogobacktomychildhoodtoexpressthankstomybelovedparentsfortheireverlastinggenerousloveforme，Affersomanyyearsofstrugglinginschoolandbusiness,Icannowunderstandhowpreciousthisloveis。1wishtoturnbackt0thepastandreciprocateallthelovetheygaveme.Goingbacktothepastisanunrealdreambutwehavetherighttoimagineit.IfIcouldstoptimeandflythroughit，1wouldreturntomychildhoodtoenjoythepeacefuldays，andtoremedytheirrationalactionsbywhichIoncemadethosethat『lovedsad.“知己知彼才能百战不殆”，虽然，新托福的作文对考生提出了更高的要求，不过，只要脚踏实地，努力准备，不断加强英文功底，掌握写作技巧，一定会取得令人满意的成绩。092矗语时仲October2007bAsM旨5z.